Poema san valentin en ingles Opiniones

Lo borro para que mi novia no se crea que lo copie o algo. :)
si quieres un poema,piensa en uno de los mejores,poema 15 de Neruda.


I like it when you're quiet. It's as if you weren't here now,
and you heard me from a distance, and my voice couldn't reach you.
It's as if your eyes had flown away from you, and as if
your mouth were closed because I leaned to kiss you.

Just as all living things are filled with my soul.
you emerge from all living things filled with the soul of me.
It's as if, a butterfly in dreams, you were my soul,
and as if you were the soul's word, melancholy.

I like it when you're quiet. It's as if you'd gone away now,
And you'd become the keening, the butterfly's insistence,
And you heard me from a distance and my voice didn't reach you.
It's then that what I want is to be quiet with your silence.

It's then that what I want is to speak to you your silence
in a speech as clear as lamplight, as plain as a gold ring.
You are quiet like the night, and like the night you're star-lit.
Your silences are star-like, they're a distant and a simple thing.

I like it when you're quiet. It's as if you weren't here now.
As if you were dead now, and sorrowful, and distant.
A word then is sufficient, or a smile, to make me happy,
Happy that it seems so certain that you're present.
Yo lo veo bien, lo único es que la parte de making love se puede entender como hacer el amor (=follar) y no se si es tu intención poner esto, en caso que quieras decir amando seria mejor cambiarlo por loving.

Un saludo.
Bueno de echo me refiero a hacer el amor [amor]

Llevamos un mes juntos no creo que pase nada por decirle eso, ademas le quita un poco de pastelosidad (si es que tiene alguna) al poema :)
Jikotea escribió:Bueno de echo me refiero a hacer el amor [amor]

Llevamos un mes juntos no creo que pase nada por decirle eso, ademas le quita un poco de pastelosidad (si es que tiene alguna) al poema :)


Entonces vale, pero he pensado a ver si le pone una cosa por otra y lo hincha a ostias XD XD.

Un saludo.
esta chulo el poema, un regalo diferente y original

y sobre lo de hacer el amor.. si te dice que es pronto o algo le dices que lo ha entendido mal o tu escrito mal jeje
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