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Mmm, quizas repites mucho el tiempo verbal... (encontro, se acerco, camino, ect) pero la fabula en si es muy bonita, la moraleja es magnifica. No obstante releyéndola creo que se podría simplificar un poco los abandonos... pero me gusta ^.^

P.D Anda uno del sur! :P; yo soy de la capital :P
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